Something

• Artist: snake_girl9405
• Description: Okay... I wrote this for a friend who is no longer a friend... Though I still deeply care for him. Vote kindly.
• Date: 11/24/2009
• Tags: something

Something like air
Rushing away
When she sees you
Coming her way

When she walks away from you
Something like breath
Running out
Almost like death

Something like water
To drown her sorrows
And take away
The time she borrows

When she awakens
Something like light
Floods away
An endless night

Something like you
Is what she wakes to
And once again
She is happy too

Comments

[BornRejectz]

this is very good i like it

[x-PixieChick]

So very sweet...thats how I feel bout ma ex..but I dont think he does....maybe he hates me...Idk.....5/5

[Cyntryli]

This is a poem that is perfectly written. And your description is well put out as well. Very well done.