pain

• Artist: pvt_Pearson
• Description: not much a poem more as a statement tell me what you think this is a tribute to all who has or is served in our armed forces
• Date: 11/24/2009
• Tags: pain

I see so many people
they go through life
taking it all for granted

but cant they see?
those people fighting
for you and for me

you walk the line
you wish you could
leave it all behind

they try to forget
the horror behind thier face
you cant see the pain
you dont feel the frustration
but its there

they have seen war
they have seen it all
but you wont ever know

pain
hate
love
loss

you think life is hard
but you dont know the half
the war behind thier mask
the pain i see in thier eyes


pain
hate
love
loss
live
die
frustration
memories

the pain
is still there
you dont know the half
of what its like

dont complain
dont shed a tear
you havent seen war
,the greatest fear

pain
hate
love
loss
live
die
frustration
memories
death
war
sacrafice
scar
hurt
kill

Comments

[pvt_Pearson]

yea thx for the idea but i made it how it is meant to be its not really a poem well it doesnt sound like one

[Kaiuc00]

it's fitting and good love the theme cuz i'm in the air force and that's how i feel every day

[halfling1]

not bad i like the concept but personally the one thing i noticed was line length, longer lines can help a poem in this case it might help, though i am not the creator so i don't know how it was really meant to be