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Blinded by hate,
Fear and loss.
Crying for help,
Alone in the dark.
Waiting for you,
That someone for me.
To open my door,
And set me free.
- by squeak160160 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2009 |
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- Title: Waiting
- Artist: squeak160160
- Description: this one is one of my favorites i just havent figured out a good name for it
- Date: 12/04/2009
- Tags: doesnt have name
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Yan Qi - 12/15/2009
- It's nice, but a bit unoriginal. It does flow quite well! 4/5
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- DREAD CRUZ - 12/09/2009
- This is neat u should name it watever comes to you
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- _M00nLiT_Ni9hT_ - 12/07/2009
- this is such a cute poem, great rhyming, writing...just a great poem!! ten out of five
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- squeak160160 - 12/04/2009
- thanks again hun
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- Shiori Takamaru - 12/04/2009
- This is my favorite of the four you've posted so far. And you're welcome for the help finding it again. ;D
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