"sadness inside"

• Artist: BrotherGEEK
• Description: Well i have this poem posted up on my myspace and atwn. but no one seems to be giving me feed backs. i made this poem when i was in this darkest, saddess moment. my friend liked it, she almost cried. :(
• Date: 12/06/2009
• Tags: sadness inside

"sadness inside"
Your the one who gave me sadness inside
now the feelings won't subside
there is no other way but to die
even if i cry
you wouldn't hear me
your only actions are to thrust
didn't you say you want my trust?
now you have what you want
what else do you need?
but you say you don't want me,
you know i need you
what am i suppose to do?
just to keep you?
you can heal the sadness inside
only then the feelings will subside
and i wouldn't have to die
now i can stop my cries.

Comments

[Xx_BloodyDeath_Wish_xX]

From poet whose work is in the newspapers I give ye only this:

It has a touchy feelin,
That makes me wanna cry.

But this sadness yew share,
Is makin me,
No longer wanna die.

Tryin to fit yew in my shoe,
It gave me a WHOLE new,
Different view!

I've see the world go round,
Peoples hearts,
Bein stomped to the ground,
But nevea have I seen,
A poem as strong as urs!






Way to go!

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[I Core I]

Nice

[Babyladii]

Your Awesome smile

[LadyThoj]

*sniff*

[hlubkoj]

i'm crying already.. sad

[Crank_dat_souljah_boi]

i love you smile

[lluvialoxar1]

i love this poem! ur sooooooo good at it! i'll show my friends, k? smile