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As I lay myself down to sleep,
with this knife I shall not weep.
Place a cross my neck and slide,
let the blood drip as I cry.
Blood and tears flowing fast,
as I take my last breath.
Stopping all the pain I feel,
as I have taken the last pill.
In then end it was not true,
All I can say is I love you.
- by Sonic_Boom33 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/15/2009 |
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- Title: Sleep
- Artist: Sonic_Boom33
- Description: This is a poem I had did when I had the worst day of my life. I had though I lost something that means the world to me. I'm just glad I didnt.
- Date: 12/15/2009
- Tags: sleep
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Sonic_Boom33 - 03/26/2010
- you are right, but I wanted a happy ending-ish
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- Auditore da Firenze - 03/26/2010
- It was fairly interesting. The rhymes were chopped near the end, which caused the flow of it to falter but overall I'd give it a 3 for extensive imagery.
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- Sonic_Boom33 - 01/31/2010
- thank you!
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- AlmostRulingTheWorld - 01/15/2010
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I like it a lot! It's sad!!! (I like sad poems...)
You get 5/5 and I'm adding it to my faves <3 - Report As Spam
- Sonic_Boom33 - 01/09/2010
- thank you! I know you don't like me so I don't care!
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- Mad_Rad_Person - 01/09/2010
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Frankly it is bad.
Rhyme Sceam. - Report As Spam
- Sonic_Boom33 - 01/04/2010
- thank you all
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