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The heart aches,
the heart breaks.
The heart was created,
with many mistakes.
I belive the heart,
should be redone.
I am the inventor,
and i will be the one.
Im going to make a heart,
a beautiful heart i say.
This new heart shall be perfect,
in every such way.
Carved from diamend,
so unbroken it shall remain.
Filled with chocolate cake,
no need to eat away the pain.
With a camp-fire inside,
to keep it from freezing.
Will that be enough,
to protect from the bully's teasing?
Let this heart be created,
with the most important thing.
I'll add in love,
with this gold ring.
- by salvadorkali |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/19/2009 |
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- Title: Faulty Design
- Artist: salvadorkali
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Description:
A poem i wrote while feeling heartbroken...
I wrote it all myself belive it or not!
Feedback is more than welcomed, its craved. - Date: 12/19/2009
- Tags: faulty design
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Comments (2 Comments)
- KatherinexPierce - 01/10/2010
- wow this was really good
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- Delilah Daisy Summers - 12/19/2009
- a few minor spelling errors, but over-all, it was amazing! 4/5
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