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i woke up one morn and saw these things:
A Rooster, crowing as the sun made its grand entrance, signifying the start of the day. It's golden rays, stretching out like fingers over the earth.
A mother, lifting a truck off her child and saving him from near death.
A dog, clearly outnumbered, fighting, for the sake of his mate.
An old man, with barely any breath left in him, giving up his only source of warmth to a freezing child.
To me, these things represent beauty far beyond our understanding. beauty so pure and childlike, that it would thrive in even the darkest of places. Yet, i have to ask, do you posses it?
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- Title: beauty
- Artist: hatchcode
- Description: well honestly i'm not a poetry person.obviously.you can see that. but uh this is the first time i'm giving my work to an impartial audience so try not to kill yourself from the horror. oh yeah also it doesn't rhyme. oh yeah i don't really know wast kinda writing it is
- Date: 12/20/2009
- Tags: beauty
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- conflicting actor - 12/31/2009
- I never rhyme my poetry unless it's by accident, you only need to efficiently express yourself for it to be a poem. I don't believe I posses it, by the way.
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