Storm Of You

• Artist: CatBugBus
• Description: Poem i wrote after i had an explosion of insperation.
  PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASSSEEE
  COMMENT AND RATE </333333
  :mrgreen:
  theres a drawing that goes with it,but i dont have a scanner ._.
• Date: 12/21/2009
• Tags: storm

The window you throw rocks at has shattered,
leaving all the shards lodged in my heart.

You mean so much to me,
and you can't see that.
But when you do, maybe the visions of our separation won't
come true.

I feel nothing for you.
But i also love and hate you.
In cliche, i hate loving you.

But when that passes, maybe we'll go back to the days in late fall,
when my warmth was your arms, and you smothered
me with your affection, love, and care.

Yet the storm in my heart and mind
hasent calmed.
And the broken pathway to you has left me feeling black and white.

Every second without you is another second in hell,
and another second of hate,depression,and loneliness.

And I still love you.

Comments

[XEmo-SpiritX]

hmm... wow u wrote this along time ago then huh? this was...erving right? lol i cant belive u loved him that much...

[BriiKittie]

i loved it. it was touching, i guess i could say. view some of mine some time. (: 5/5 !

[gerbils4]

Wow...and I thought I tried to put it to words.....I gotta give you props on this man. That was amazing. Beautiful.

[Estarine Zephaloid]

That's so sad, i would have loved to see the image=( I LOVED it, favorited, and that's very rare for me! Please check the spelling though, it ruins the effect. You should see my latest.

[BookishSnowWhite]

Cute. I liked it. But you want to check spelling.
=^.^=