cold as ice

• Artist: Namyw_Draco
• Description: I was feeling rather in the winter spirit and so I thought I should write about my feelings. and thought I would add in some mystery of ghosts. Part of the poem is not meant to rime, it is for effect. Where the poem rimes she is following the structures of life, but in death she acknowledges
• Date: 12/24/2009
• Tags: cold

I open my eyes
To the darkness of night
I walk to the window
Flooding with light
The moon is full
The snow is bright

I put my hand
To the window
Frozen with ice
Not as cold
As I remember

I go to the door
And the wind
Rushes in
Not as cold
As I remember

I walk out
Into the night
My feet bare
In the snow
Not as cold
As I remember

I look back
To my body
It failed
in its attempt
to keep warm

Now the world
Covered in snow
Is not as cold
As I remember

Comments

[Namyw_Draco]

sorry for the lack of sentance finnishing, she acknowledges the rules are not the same as before, not the same as she remembers.