Look Around

• Artist: Weillyn
• Description: To sum up these lyrics (this is the first song I've written), my friend told me he wanted to die. He was convinced that everyone hates him and that all he's doing by being alive is hurting me, I spent a long while convincing him that he's wrong. This song will have a video to go with it on youtube, sung by me.
  I know little rhymes, but these are mostly just thoughts, a story if you will, put in song form.
• Date: 01/04/2010
• Tags: look around suicide

You tell me that you're done,
And you don't want to live anymore,
Bruised, Bloody and Broken,
You wait in silence for the end.

I tell you every day that I love you,
You tell me. . . .
You tell me to stop with the lies,
'Cause life is jsut a curse,
Nothing could get worse,
Well how do you think I feel?

(Chorus)
Would you look around, please?
Just open up your eyes,
These things that I say,
Well not a single one's a lie,
You say being alive is hurting me,
Did you think about if you die?
What's life then. . . .
Once I've lost a friend. . . .?

Tell me all you want that you're worthless,
Try and tell me no one cares,
What'll it take to prove you're wrong?
Its time to stop playing pretend!

(Chorus)

So please, look around
And know that people care,
And please, good God please,
Don't give up on yourself.

Comments

[Kameron-Anemone]

2 stanza, 4th line down! Hurry, girl, hurry!
Ugh, as for the fact of this guy's persnality... I'd question it, thoroughly... Find the options in the matter, and try not to F things up(again in my case). Anyway, you may want to look into "Open Up Your Mind" by Mirai. It's really good, and might help with making this better. ;3

[x Trigg x]

very good love....for first one it is good, short...and rhyme not much if any, but yu dont have to rhyme.

i like it^^