Love

• Artist: bone w a l t z
• Description: A poem-a very bad one-by mmeeee!!! Lol. I know it's bad so please be nice and not insult it. :(
• Date: 01/12/2010
• Tags: love

I stop and stutter,
And I try to mutter,
And when you smile my stomach flutters,
And at last I utter,
“I love you” and my heart plunders,
But you smile and you smother,
My lips with your lips,
And my whole world tips,
While inside my heart flips,
And I latch on to your hips,
My mind races,
Out of so many faces,
Yours is the one I need to see,
Always and forever, right beside me
sweatdrop

Comments

[Kaiuc00]

all i got is don't try to ryhme so much

[Fille aux Cheveux de Lin]

It sounds as if you just made it line by line based soley on finding a word to rhyhme with the last.

[Rawr Mehh Dinosaur]

Good. I was about to bawl!