agian

• Artist: Mjosi
• Description: i know its stupid but i want to know what others think of my poetry...
• Date: 01/24/2010
• Tags: agian

Agian i woke up crying,
agian the nightmares plauged me,
agian i seek the arms of friends,
agian i feel scared,
agian i feel alone,
agian i cry in the dark,
agian i cry all alone,
agian i lie awake,
agian the morning comes,
agian i get up,
agian i fix the mask,
agian i hope it will stay,
agian i pray for it to fall,
agian i hope you wont see,
agian i pray youll notice,
agian i go to school,
agian i act happy,
agian i try to laugh,
agian i hope the cycle will break,
agian i pray the cycle will stop,
agian i try to hide,
agian i pray im found...

Comments

[Mjosi]

i wrote it like 1 in the morning half asleep and I suck at spelling. and it's the writing style...

[Fumichochan]

You spelled "Again" wrong 23 times.
Why's that? It's easy to spell. :s
And you spelled "plague" wrong.
And your poem sucks. And, you use "again" too many times. :s 2/5