waiting dead lovers

• Artist: havikdemond2
• Description: a poem for the love of my life
• Date: 01/26/2010
• Tags: waiting dead lovers

one day
i dream of us
we lovers
sharing that kiss
it holds more than we let on
like a story kept secret
for centuries by end
this tale cant end up like
romeo and juliet
you wont die on me
ill live just for you
there are no words that can be spoken
there is no picture that can be drawn
there is no song that can be herd
there is no joy that you can feel
that will ever show you how much i love you
how much you mean to me
how much i need you
what you are to me and why i only see the point
in living is with you
but i do...
and will always love you

Comments

[is that a bear]

Vll-Cloud Strife-Vll: sadly we dont all have happy endings i am with you on that. and punctuation and "speeling" are just fine lol. this is quite delicious. great job.

[havikdemond2]

sunafire, ou dont need punctuation in a poem.... and im not gunna worry about the speeling

[Sunafire]

Try and improve the spelling and punctuation a little bit, but other than that it's beautiful smile

[Vll-Cloud Strife-Vll]

hmhm the things we do for those we love huh.. "sigh" sadly not all of us get our happy endings..

[BatzLove]

aw, and im sure she'll love it! *hugs*
ur starting to cheer up arent cha? :3