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Falling apart,
and never coming back together.
He was tart,
I wasn't clever.
I didn't do enough,
he didn't care.
He could only bluff,
and I could only stare.
Not good,
going down.
There I stood,
like a clown.
I promised it didn't hurt.
I said we'd still be friends.
Anyways, all I did was flirt,
no need to pretend.
It's all on me,
this is my own fault.
I'm not going to plea,
he saw in me a heart as bitter as salt.
I feel like crashing,
but I have no remorse.
In my broken heart I am drowning and splashing,
but I know this has run it's course.
Who to go to now?
Love is in the air.
And then get them. . .how?
This love thing just isn't fair.
Happy but sad,
here we go again.
I need to find myself some new lad,
just in order to feel once more.
- by Scarletgreen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/03/2010 |
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- Title: Falling Apart.
- Artist: Scarletgreen
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Description:
Me and my boyfriend just broke up, but I'm getting better now. Almost all better~ but just felt the need to write this poem.
Be sure to leave comments and check out my other work, too!
I appreciate constructive criticism the best thanks much.
: )
Love to all my fans;
~Scar - Date: 02/03/2010
- Tags: falling apart
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Writer Selbe - 02/12/2010
- Aaaw! 5/5 I really liked it. I didn't really see anything wrong with it. I liked it because it had feeling to it.
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- Scarletgreen - 02/03/2010
- lol @ wolf xD
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- xxBrokenWingedWolfxx - 02/03/2010
- FIRST!! YAY!!!...aw...so depressing...yet so true...4/5
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