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those are the words that sound right
theres nothing else that comes close
i cant find any words that feel quite right
when i first saw you i froze
my heart began to melt
my words would come hesitantly
as i found how i felt
and my heart you stole graduently
and though we can not be
i still have this love
and i am not filled with glee
so like a flightless dove
we wont be
- by Kier Dishonored |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/09/2010 |
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- Title: i love you
- Artist: Kier Dishonored
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- Date: 02/09/2010
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Kier Dishonored - 01/21/2012
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im just gonna remind everyone this was written 2 years ago in february.
[oh and i dont remember writing this]
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- Danni6565 - 01/16/2012
- It seems you were trying to make each stanza a quatrain.. And didn't really know what to do with that last line. I like the poem, though your style ignores grammar rules. Some poets do that, so it's alright. In line 9, I think you meant "gradually," not "graduently."
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- Xlonely_tear_dropX - 02/12/2010
- awww T^T i love it, its awesome and yes it is romantic 5/5
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- bmrdbgt - 02/11/2010
- Romantic, but lacking in the grammer department. 3/5
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