Black

• Artist: Sundavrblaka
• Description: Kinda sad. i was in a mood and had to write it. i would really appreciate reviewing if you read it.
• Date: 03/05/2010
• Tags: black short angst

My words on this page
Turning my tears black
The color of my heart

Comments

[peinture avec angelique]

It's nice, but it could have been a bit longer. If you don't normally do sad poems, then that's really well done! If it's a regular thing, I'd suggest putting some length to it. In general, poems that start with a "normal" setting and gradually fades into sadness are goldmines. Try that next time. smile

[Ajani Kai]

Interesting synopsis of feeling. Short and too the point, but interesting how it is portraying not just your heart, but also a sense of feeling.