HOW IT WOULD END

• Artist: greeneys702
• Description: I WROTE THIS FOR MY GRANDMOTHER AFTER SHE DIED IN 2006, SHE WAS MY BESTFRIEND AND I MISS HER ALOT.
• Date: 03/23/2010
• Tags: would

tab I know you were hurting although you wouldn't cry, and could see you
were suffering, see the pain in your eye's. I wanted to comfort you, to hold
you, be with you that day, you looked so helpless and frail, while in bed you
did lay.
tab I wanted to scream, to shout, and to yell, you said you were fine,
although you skin was so pale. I stood there watching as each breath came
slow, and fought to find courage, my emotions were low. I promised you
when the time came, that I would not cry, you never saw my eyes wet, they
were always dry.
tab I stroked your forehead and said how much I loved you, you nodded and
smilied, and I knew that you knew. I held your hand, as I silently said goodbye
and knew in my heart that soon you would die. Now I know your somewhere
better watching over me and everything that I do, and I know you'll keep
watching me until God wants me too.

Comments

[water haze]

It's great.... The problem that I've encountered.. And so have a lot of people is, that when it comes to writing emotional osts and other poems is that the emotional aspect completely encompasses it, but the writing ends up going off in tangents.
This however is good... Literature wise because it uses the large amount of emotion in it, but it still stays ontrack and in one direction rather than twenty.
I like it for your artwork.. I don't because I hate for anybody to be in pain.

[Antoinette sugar]

It's so heartfelt. It must have been really hard to let her go. You must miss her alot. This is a beautiful piece of literature.