What I Know

• Artist: Elektro7
• Description: Edit: Apr 17--
  This is a FREE VERSE poem, just like every other poem I hav eposted up, and likely ever will, the rhyme scheme isn't set, it will vary from time to time, in fact If I didn't want it to, I wouldn't have to make rhyme at all, and it would still be a free verse.
• Date: 04/17/2010
• Tags: know what

Eyes that shame the heavens
And a smile that dims the sun,
If there's anything I know for sure
it's that you are the one,

The one I love with all my heart
Who i'd die for if need be,
But let's hope it doesn't come to that
That it can just be you and me.


Every instant I spend near you,
And each day we're apart,
Both are equal in feeling,
And both are killing this heart,

For every moment in your presense
That I've been blessed by,
Is just a reminder of every that isn't--
When my heart's in standby

Comments

[Elektro7]

First off, there are no grammar errors.

Secondly, as the billionth person to point out the rhythm doesn't match, i've decided to add a special disclaimer in the description just for the people like you, so I don't have to correct them in every single PM I get.

[escreamas]

you had a few grammer errors and the rythmz didnt match at all 2/5