Hollow

• Artist: Xxhidden_wingsxX
• Description: a poem i wrote when i was in a bad mood.... clearly -_-". please comment, rate, fan, etc :)
• Date: 04/26/2010
• Tags: hollow sadness alone

Empty yet breathing,,
Silently weeping,
Waiting for a savior to come.

Don't wait up for me,
I'm past the place where you can see,
Slowly fading into myself.

Silently my heart screams,
As I rip apart by the seams,
Yet no one can hear me now.

Beauty is far gone,
Where did it all go wrong?
And now there is nowhere to run.

But it seems that I'm alone,
A broken girl without a home,
Hiding so know one will see.

Hollow inside that smile,
Each day comes as a trail,
A game that she must play.

And the sad thing is,
That it's impossible for her to win,
Yet she still carries on.

Hollow inside,
Her feeble young mind,
Who does not yet know herself.

Comments

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

It seemed, at first,like another trite poem BUT you changed the direction of it. 3/5