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Part I: Introduction
I am a mortal man in an immortal land.
Hanging around with immortal god's and goddesses...
I am the man who names "mask".
The best pretender in our land.
I am the man with hundred of secrets kept.
Wearing my mask, I pass already lots of life's tests.
I am a Loner, or an "emo" that they called having the guts of the face of an Adonis.
better to watch your every step, cause I' am just watching you in the darkness. ninja
I am the mask. The mortal man who lives in the immortal land.
Part II: Every night's blaugh Sadness
I lied on the darkness,
with such sorrow and melancholy. cry
I ponder and wonder, when could I gonna found my true happiness, that hides in the darkest corners of a very far place.
Where it is, what is it, That might complete my happiness.
Part III: Rise, Shine and...Dream
I wake up at last,
As the sun goes up.
I heard the birds at the trees,
singing beautiful melodies.
I sip a soup,
and taste some fruit.
I have some walk,
in the neighborhood.
I saw the highest mountain of all.
The famous, Munt Olympus of the Lords.
I felt some what curiosity,
to go to that mountain peak.
Part IV: Now...
I made my way down and up.
I passed a lot of towns, arrow
go through different grounds.
This journey isn't easy.
(Well what's easy?)
In this life of ours, sacrifice is a must.
I often go to church and mass,
but couldn't have an inner peace even ones.
I always worry a lot...
The mask is a wrath and a sloth.
I'm a fallen angel, victim of Life.
(sigh*)
I wrote a story about my life.
This is a living story of a person named mask.
What will happened next is a mystery to both of us.
I will then pass my quills to god's hand,
for my life is in his hands...
- by ken_lovehatred |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/02/2010 |
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- Title: The Mask
- Artist: ken_lovehatred
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Description:
This is my 1st written story. Actually it is an allegory poem story...so i dont know what category should i place it.
This is actually like the dante's story...It is the story of a person called mask which is actually me. It is very symbolical...
I tried my best to create this one...sorry for some errors and wrong grammars...
Pls comment and rate my work...thanks.
and...when you read this please READ BETWEEN THE LINES AS WELL...
also feel the story...XD LOLS - Date: 06/02/2010
- Tags: mask kenlovehatred allegory poem
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ken_lovehatred - 06/17/2010
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thank you! XD
(so happy...) - Report As Spam
- unslain - 06/12/2010
- to me i feel as if mask is an outcast trying to work for something better that what he has.. working against many things that are trying to digress him from his path. I feel this story relates to me in a way. I like it. 5/5 just work on your wording a bit >.<
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- ken_lovehatred - 06/02/2010
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Error 1:
a smiley after the word Every night's...in the subtitle of part II. - Report As Spam