Amber Light

• Artist: LittleNewcomb
• Description: something i wrote when i was getting better from a really long string of s**t that i had to deal with in life...
• Date: 06/08/2010
• Tags: amber light

Amber Light

The rustling of the leaves
Amid the tall restless trees,
And with the setting of the sun
The day is almost done

Oh, how I wish you could see
The elongated shadows around me.
Bathed deep in amber light
For once everything seems alright.

The smile on your face
Makes it seem that everything is in place.
How I wish we could stay this way forever
Before the world begins to sever.

-SR.

Comments

[XCu_ComghallX]

PERFECT!!! Simple but powerful!, many try to write these LONG a** poems and try to get it all down but u like a true poet condense it. Truly great good work. And u dont whine....theres no whining in poetry. Good job!