My heart Hurts

• Artist: ChiquitaChacon
• Description: I do not cut myself. I am not even that sad. I just like to write.
• Date: 06/17/2010
• Tags: heart hurts

I remember the feelings, the day
He stole my heart and ranaway

He stole my heart but I let him keep it
Because he fixed my dark heart, my heart it lit

He said he would take care of me, but when weeks past
The relationship, it didn't last

He got mad at me and broke my heart
I said "sorry" but he kept crushing it, the pieces were falling apart

My heart was then gone, pieces just floating aloft
Hope he knew I really liked him alot

Im slowly killing myself
Cutting my wrists till theres nothing else

Getting one step closer to knocking on hell's door
Since he doesn't love me anymore

Comments

[Mario the Davidic Hero]

very VERY good! 5/5

*faves*

[Phobos Dominus]

i know how the need to write can lead others to think you're a cutter... It happens to me all the time... great writings though... could use some work and sad poems don't usually rhyme but above all else 5/5 for over al thought and complexity it was nice but could use work

[apollos_girl freind]

*cries*i know how that feels.5/5 and on favs!