For A Special "Friend"

• Artist: sweetpeapunk
• Description: Backstabbing, Friends, a*****e, Guy, Loser
• Date: 06/21/2010
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You seem so wise and caring,
You seem so creative and deep.
And although you're quite alluring.
You're really just a cheat.
You pretend to like a person,
Then rip their heart in two.
You're a better actor than I am,
But your heart is bitter and cruel.

Comments

[sweetpeapunk]

Thanks, this one wasn't actually complete but I stopped caring before I came back and finished it so it didn't have the right feeling to end it. I posted it anyways as a way to let go. smile So thanks for the comment.

[SlamminSquirrelBaby]

I like how you kept to one subject, the person's character, you made it straight forward, you lacked a hook. But, you were not complicated of the meaning. Clearly a person of two faces ripped you a knew insight of life. I didn't have to read your discription to get your feelings of anger torward this person. Very nice job. But, you lack a certain pull.