within the light

• Artist: evil_within123
• Description: an old writing i've done,plz comment
• Date: 06/29/2010
• Tags: within light

With the light that shines threw clear window
I see happness within those lights,
watching the clouds go by
Hearing the beautiful sound of the mockingbird
Feeling the light breeze of fresh air
Smelling cut grasses.
being with the light that follows me home i feel peacefull

Comments

[KingBet]

It seems a little too short... I think if you added more things or even extended your story your could really catch the reader. Yet how it is now is still really good ^.^