Striving Without Action

• Artist: fightoffyourdemons101
• Description: an tanka based off of the Tao Te Ching. not a big poem by any means, but i think it says alot in few words.
• Date: 07/02/2010
• Tags: striving without action time space

i see many things
abstract visions of the world
all of time and space
how it all falls together
and how it all comes apart

Comments

[FieryDawn]

3/5 Right to the point, and left me wondering. Be sure to capitalize your I's and punctuate your poetry.