Train Tracks

• Artist: Madjawa
• Description: A poem trying to describe that once in a lifetime moment when your walking with the one you love, and you feel infinite.
• Date: 07/14/2010
• Tags: train tracks

You’ve found the cure
So it would seem.
Your heart shaped hole is filled with gold.

You intrigue me so,
So let’s go walk.
Amoung train tracks we’ll talk.

We’ll talk about our dreams,
And the world at large.
Where we want to go,
And the beauty of stars.

The breeze is cool
The sun is bright
Our train track walk
Streches into the night.

At the end of the track
We look up and see
A single golden star
Smiling down on you and me.

Comments

[Sally Spearow]

i really liked it. Keep writing.

[h00drat64]

It's okay. It didn't really evoke any emotion from me, though- a bit too cheesy for my tastes. All of the things you described, I would expect from a poem "about walking with one you love;" there wasn't anything new brought to the table. 2/5