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A song long forgotten since that day
The day distance swelled well upon us
Too far for us to reach
Too much reasons for each
Aloof of what immodest untruth
From hoping forever we would
Is there any good?
To remember our song so sweet and kind?
To feel those lost lyrics once more?
You can never hear the voice you once adored
I will ever be empty and dispondent
Always longing of the one I once knew
Pain clasped to let go of you
As the song was ending and tired
On repeat but ever to be omitted
Though I had never admitted
That I had slighted everything of you
But never can I have the same you again
- by ArchVerrine |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/30/2010 |
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Comments (4 Comments)
- NoireLixue - 11/03/2010
- ;~; I think me gonna cry from this song. . .
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- Alpha-Wolf-Madyrn - 10/19/2010
- good job smile ) 5/5
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- WaywardxDaughter - 09/08/2010
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I enjoy your rhyme scheme. You subject is striking as well. It reminds me of the way a single song can remind you so strikingly of one particular person or place. You can hear the speaker in the poem struggling with this aspect of the song in question. Listen to the song and be reminded of the person and the pain that comes with the loss of that person, or to stop listening all together?
Great, I really enjoyed it! 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Her-Infernal-Sentinal - 09/04/2010
- this is really really good nice work 5/5
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