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I shall not leave you my love, though your body may grow chill.
I will be here my love for you in this hour that will,
drain the heat from your heavenly fleet.
No man may know how many their are, no heart could fathom the reach how far.
You my love do not end on this shore, you my love go far beyond the lands of yore.
Swaying in rhyme and living in time, you destroy as you create and tis your hand I await.
You are my first true love and I watch you from above.
I am high in flight, you are strong in might.
Never shall I leave you my love, for you and I are as one.
- by Riven Larustaki |
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- | Submitted on 09/14/2010 |
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- Title: Nature To A Degree
- Artist: Riven Larustaki
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Description:
'Nature To A Degree' is a Riven Larustaki original piece based in imagery from a sunset on a beach. I make strong use of imagery in most of my poems and this is probably the most imagery I have posted in an open forum in some time!
Enjoy! - Date: 09/14/2010
- Tags: nature degree
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Riven Larustaki - 09/23/2010
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- NerdyMiss - 09/22/2010
- Very well written. The their/there mistake was already pointed out. It was rather hard to follow, but abstract poetry isn't my greatest interest and so it is my own fault not yours. Great concept. Keep writing.
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- xxregisterxx - 09/19/2010
- Abstract
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- Ladoncyan - 09/14/2010
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Amazing!
Only one mistake. There, not their. - Report As Spam
- Riven Larustaki - 09/14/2010
- Thank you both for your comments!
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- Shanra the Dragon Bard - 09/14/2010
- Glad to see you finally entered it Riven. 5'd you.
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- starburst6_30 - 09/14/2010
- I like it biggrin Nice work
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