Disrespectful: Bye Bye

• Artist: Kiririn Poke
• Description: A girl tried to take my bf away. It was a bad move. LOL
  
  Everything in the poem is true, including the changing name and leaving country parts. It's actually about two events. I've been through this twice in my life, counting serious cases. In both of them my bfs were friends with the girls and the girls made moves on them including getting naked and trying to...you know, etc. Both my bfs didnt want the girls.
  
  I'm not a native English speaker. It's a simple stupid poem.
• Date: 12/07/2010
• Tags: disrespectful boyfriend love revenge dating

She changed her name
Burnt all her letters
Wrote an unstable note
Left the country

This is a true story
Before those happened
Got a message from me
My boyfriend, no touchy ^^

I wish she shaved her head too
Then it would be so complete
Our laughter,
And her defeat.

Took out my cigar
And the whisky
For special days
Like this indeed.

Comments

[Kiririn Poke]

Yeah, thus I added the story. When I write stuff, I don't usually think about if it will be clear for people to understand. Coz I usually don't think, just write with feeling lol. Plus English is not my main language T^T Tanx for the comment :*)

[livingdeadone]

For a narrative poem, it didn't convey the story very well. I would have been fairly lost without the story reiterated in your description.