F%&! Off- I Don't Need You

• Artist: Psyjitsu
• Description: This is about my anger toward all the people at my new school who can't be real. I recently moved, and most of the guys act like jackasses and the girls act like sluts. There are exceptions of course, and the exceptions are me and my friends. *is also an Atheist*
• Date: 12/16/2010
• Tags: dont need

First thing's first- lemme lay it out straight.
I don't need you and I don't follow "fate."
Only I choose what I get to do.
Not you or your friends or your posse or your crew.


I don't need your "God" and I don't want your s**t.
I'm gonna walk away and I'm gonna forget.
Forget about you, forget what you said,
And I'm gonna get rid of your voice in my head.


I'm not gonna give in and follow the "norm,"
You stay inside- I'll brave the storm.
I'll walk out in the lightning and rain,
And I'll do it with bulletholes piercing my brain.


So now that you know how strongly I feel,
Maybe you'll join me and see what's real.
Illusions of glamor and thoughts of grandeur
All fill your head and we can't find a cure.


I defy your laws and shatter your physics.
Your mind is closed and you've reached your limit.
But higher I soar on wings of gold,
The finger is up and my shoulder is cold.

Comments

[ChelseasDeadSmile]

Unlike some people who find offense to vulgarity and peoples need to tell any religion to kindly fall off a steep cliff, I immediately understood the emotions of anger powering through this piece. I believe that you may be in a Catholic school (if not, sorry about that) as the use of hating God really comes through.
5/5 I believe in all the old world gods so I do feel a bit stung, but not to the point that I'm not going to let it decide how I rate your poem.

[Shanra the Dragon Bard]

Can't give you high marks on this one I'm afraid. I don't condone the use of vulgar language, especially in poetry and the title of the piece is offensive. I'm also a Christian, so your reference to God didn't sit well with me.