Her love her words gone

• Artist: alexandriamoon_fun154
• Description: just a poem about regert
• Date: 12/18/2010
• Tags: love words gone

her words always comforted him
until the day she died by his hand
she kissed him so dearly so nicely
until the day he hurt those lips so badly
she let him cry on her lap when something bad had happen
until the day he cut those legs of hers
always so nicely she used to tell him good night
until the day there was no night for her anymore
she used to let him touch her hair so beatuiful so dark
until the day he let the blood mixed with her dark hair
she used to always have that dark red love ribbon with her
until the day he ripped it from her
she loved him with all her life well that what she used to say
until the day he took that love away her life
everything as so beatuiful
until the day she cheated on him
But now there's only her body on the floor with no regert coming from him but from her in her heart heart

Comments

[alexandriamoon_fun154]

thanks and it's my first time

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

This is a really interesting poem. I like it. But you should do some proofreading, and try to eliminate run-on sentences and spelling errors. 4!