Knock on the Sky

• Artist: Kaia Black
• Description: Sooo i just saw tron like 30 min ago lol and i decided to write this by free writing haha might edit it later
• Date: 01/06/2011
• Tags: knock

Knock on the sky
And listen to the sound
Way up there
Where the stars abound

Can you hear the whisper of the stars
Or perhaps you hear the roar of mars
Do you hear the stillness and peace
Do you see the milky way, white as fleece

Do you see the comet's tails
Or do you see Earth from where you hale
As you Knock on the sky
Do you see the creator's eye

Knock on the sky
And listen to the sound
Way up there
Where stars abound

Do you hear the howls of the moon
And put up your ear to hear the monsoon
Coming form Pluto you hear wind
As layer upon layer are thinned

When you hear the universe calling your name
Do you deam of glory or even fame
Or do listen to what it tells you
Hoping with all your heart for a breakthrough

Knock on the sky
And listen to the sound
Way up there
Where stars abound

Comments

[vardofive]

Poems don't have to rhyme. It's too bad because this could have been really, really excellent. The first stanza is great "Knock on the sky
And listen to the sound
Way up there
Where the stars abound"
And even some of the other parts but the rhymes seem reached for and that really takes away from an otherwise great poem.