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We have loved, and we have hated.
We have cryed, and been sedated.
The light will shine, and darkness will fall.
But behind this charade, there lies a soul.
You say im heartless, and cold as well.
You say i don't care, for my life is blank.
We all have defaults, and similarly horrid disadvantages.
But i tell you this, i do still love.
I may not care about you, nor him nor her.
I may not feel this sorrow, or this hate.
They elude me, with such elegant grace.
But in this light or darkness you see, i do hold one as close as can be.
Skies conitnually fall, and earth simultaniously rises.
Heat fades away, as ice waltzes in.
Night turns to day, and yet we all fall in sync.
And on this day upon this earth, i bid you adieu as i leave for you.....
- Title: Solice
- Artist: Vastrix
- Description: Wrote this while feeling down and missing my love. leave comments and ratings
- Date: 01/15/2011
- Tags: solice
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Vastrix - 01/22/2011
- I have been trying. Thanks for the support on yet another
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- Ichigo kuroku - 01/22/2011
- I LOVE IT!!!!! the flow is a little bit uneven but not all poems need to conform to the rules. i applaud ur indpendence from traditional form! i loved it! really it was great! you need to write more!!!!!
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- maydaymouse - 01/15/2011
- It's a beautiful poem, just the flow of it is a little awkward. But, I won't downrate you for that! So, 5/5, nice job!^^
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