Do you remember the time?

• Artist: AkariUchiha15
• Description: I wrote this for a friend of mine. He was having writers block everytime he would try to write a song so i said that i would make one for him to see if it would get his gears going and sure enough 2 weeks later he made 2 new songs :3 Honestly his songs aren't that great, but i dont mind listening to them. Some of them are pretty good and others are just catchy yet stupid haha but yeah ^^
• Date: 02/11/2011
• Tags: timeyoumelovehurt

We were sittin by the pond at dawn
You were used to being alone
But now it’s all coo boo
Cause now I’ve got chu
And I ain’t gona leave you like all the others do
But I hope you know how much I love ya babe
Because it’s just me an you sittin by the pond at dawn
Waiting for something to happen even though we know we gota move to get something started
And as much as I would love to take you out girl
You ain’t got the courage, the heart
To fall in love and take a chance at meetin the one you love
So here I sit
Waiting for you to take my hand
But chu don’t even look my way
You ask me why I try
And it’s all because I’m in love with chu girl
I ain’t the same no more since I met cha girl
And I would love to have you just for a day
So that I could make you fall for me too
Then we could be sittin by the pond at dawn
Finding more ways to love each other girl
Finding more things to love about cha girl
Hoping that you love me too boo
And hopin that you’ll follow through with your lovin me
Cause I’m crazy in love with ya girl
And I wouldn’t want it any other way
Cause you da one I want to make life long memories with
So tell me girl
Do you remember the time?
You were sittin by pond at dawn
You were used to being alone
But it’s all coo boo
Now that I’ve got chu

Comments

[AkariUchiha15]

i'm confused.

[Rkah]

I dont honestly think you should be his critique. Your wasnt thast good either.