Dreams

• Artist: Greymon5
• Description: I am proud to have written this poem, not just because it turned out decent, but that it was a succesful interpretation of my feelings at a certain time in life. I felt surprisingly satisfied when my pen hit paper and my thoughts expressed themselves coherently. I hope everyone enjoys it. :-)
• Date: 03/24/2011
• Tags: dreams

My dreams are lined up, upon a wall
One by one they begin to fall
They land with a crash
On my head with a bash
And I begin to feel not so tall.

But then I remember not to despair
For life ahead of me is many a stair
I collect my dreams
Stitched back at the seams
And venture out again but with great care

Hope has returned to the depths of my heart
Reason to live has arrived by a cart
I gather my wits
Though they are in bits
And climb up the wall, as fat as a dart.

Comments

[Arthur Dent Needs Tea]

I'm so happy you got such satisfaction out of this writing! I enjoyed it.

[Killumika]

Beautiful ♥♥♥

[runescape_freak711]

wow! this is amazing! it flows and the rhyming is just great! I love♥ it