Silent Screams

• Artist: ninja_gir123
• Description: This is probably not in proper format and theres probably lots of gramatical errors but please go past that and just read it>w< constructive critisizm only please
• Date: 05/11/2011
• Tags: silent screams

I won't believe your lies
I won't listen to your judgement
Each word is a bullet to my heart
Each bloody bullet is another hand over my mouth
Suffocating my screams
My last reply to life
My first hello to death

Comments

[Apathetic Castiel]

You could do much more with this!!! add more lines and explain why/how you feel this way or who/what made ou this way.. 4/5

[Wym_Clock]

i not understand..
3/5