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Snow is so pure
Yet it's so cold
Like human life
Falling from the sky
And melt on the ground
Life should be like a snow falling
Don't last long, but makes great memories
Human soul is pure
Like the falling snow from the sky
But, why they can turned into sinful creature?
Who to blame?
Who to blame pollute the falling snow?
It's us sinful sons of man
Can we ever see the white snow again?
The answer is in our hand
Comments (2 Comments)
- xXImaAussieXx - 10/08/2011
- Haha it was good I'm looking through all of your poems I give it a 5 wink
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- Tino x World Boss - 07/14/2011
- Very nicely done. I have to say for a noob you did pretty well biggrin . hahaha lol jk wink . Don't worry imma noob too! I just started writing on here and i love it although i only have two so far xD! Anyhow, you did very well. It was deep but short. And theres nothing wrong with that. I loved it. As another writer, i understood it pretty quickly. Some people might not. Good job! i give it a 5 smile
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