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• Artist: Nymfie
• Description: I imagined a person who commits suicide and I was thinking about the last things he or she saw before dying.
• Date: 06/17/2011
• Tags: untitled

Alcohol and cyanide
Smoky Persian carpets
Cigarette butts, formaldehyde
And a heart shaped locket
A bathtub and a toaster
Scented candles and a fork
10 gallons of water
And a snow globe of New York
An antique lamp on wooden floors
A painting of a view
Records playing behind closed doors
My favorite pair of shoes
Leather pants, a line of cocaine
Fresh weed and ecstasy
A bottle of the most expensive champagne
Letters from you to me
A revolver, a pair of kitchen shears
My box of photographs
A bucket of forgotten tears
Albums and autographs
A canister of random pills
A scalpel and a wire
Flowers on the window sill
And my urbane attire
Silky sheets and curtain rods
A lighter and a tote
One final whisper to God
And my suicide note.

Comments

[Nymfie]

awwwww, thank you! <3

[FoundInSong]

Oh. My. God.

I loved this. It hit me so hard, and it was so beautiful and horrifying at the same time. I loved it, I loved it, I loved it.

The rhymimg was good, the words were welll picked... I honestly cannot find anything wrong with this. At all. It was really powerful.