Blank Canvas

• Artist: BritAurora
• Description: I created this poem out of beredeum, yes bordeum. Please comment =3
• Date: 07/11/2011
• Tags: blank canvas

Skattered thoughts
Complement the flying colors
Shattered confusment

Acheing and Crying?
Vengful and Agile?
Strenght and Trying?

White eyes cloud these thoughts
Until the rythm changes paces
The colors shroud, The land shifts

In this moment I soak it in
As it dwindles I am left with something
On a canvas, In the cloak I once hid

Comments

[peeklin]

For being the result of boredom, this sure did turn out pretty good. I have to think hard before I can come up with words as deep as those. I'd like to see something that you actually spent time on writing. smile

[WhiteMageBef]

Intresting piece. could have used a bit more but, it worked. smile