Mine

• Artist: AloriD
• Description: It came to me at random, and I had to write it down before it got away. I'm glad I did.
• Date: 11/13/2011
• Tags: mine dreams dreaming

Misty dreams of which take flight,
From the dark and towards the light.
Silent watchers of which can see,
How great those nightly dreams will be.

Parade of sound of which will go,
And let the dreams flit to and fro.
Be those dreams of which can climb,
Are those dreams of which are mine.

Comments

[DanteZephyr]

this is ok. but it would be better if you made about two stanzas longer, not enough catching details. 3/5