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The mountains are asleep in snow.
Along this winding road I go
As night approaches, silent, slow,
And white the fading forests grow.
The stream lies still beneath the pines,
Their downcast boughs in snowfall's bind;
Whose woods these are, I do not know
For I am far from all mankind.
White is the road, and white the grass--
They blur into a single mass
As quicker, thicker falls the snow.
The moon is high. The night falls fast.
My frigid fingers form a lair
In-coat, but find no comfort there.
I draw a frosty breath, and blow
My bitter thoughts to biting air.
The moon retreats. The world well known
Has vanished-- I am all alone.
Across the way, a carrion crow
Is picking at a frozen bone.
My body's numb from head to toe
And, stumbling, I onward go.
The wolf cries out in winter woe
The joyless silence to forgo.
Beleaguered by a darkness deep,
I feel a melancholy steep;
For I have miles and miles to go
But here is where I'll find my Sleep.
- by Gideon Striche |
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- | Submitted on 02/06/2012 |
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- Title: Stopping--
- Artist: Gideon Striche
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Description:
A little something as the winter takes a turn for the colder. Inspired by elements from Frost's "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening," with a gradually darker mood.
Stay warm this winter. - Date: 02/06/2012
- Tags: stopping snow cold winter death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Shimomo-San - 03/20/2012
- Some poems here are just an AABB rhyme scheme, a simple poem. I like how yours has a feeling, an actual meaning, and a rare rhyme scheme. It's almost a ballad!
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- Slinkenhofer - 02/08/2012
- Excellent smile It's refreshing to read a poem with a working rhyme scheme and a smooth tempo.
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