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Young innocent, where have you gone
Last time I saw you was hours before dawn
You ran off in the night with thoughts in your head
I fear the worse, could you really be dead
This can't be true I know it's not
All eyes were deceived, this boy isn't in a grave
But in a place of darkness
He was kind to all treated everyone the same
But some don't take kindness as well as others
Because the one he was most kind to
Had choose to leave him for another
He didn't understand, he was a good guy
Although a little shy he never let a good thing die
He's been deceived countless times by the one's he loved
So open yet so misunderstood
Love is between two people not one
so he said why not quit love and be done
He choose to deny all who came
Even the one's with fortune or fame
Love is for the weak he had set in his mind
Love became his enemy for all time
- Title: Love lost
- Artist: GahleeDub
- Description: First ever poem, picked something that came from a past experience Hope you enjoy
- Date: 04/13/2014
- Tags: love lost
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Koram of Tamas - 07/20/2014
- I little off-flow in spots but a wonderful start. Keep it up!
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- StepherStep - 04/14/2014
- Ooo i liked the poem ^-^ make morererererere!
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- Telbie - 04/13/2014
- This is good. Very good theme and transition. But you have to improve the structure. Keep it up! biggrin
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- GahleeDub - 04/13/2014
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Thanks
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- thecelticqueen - 04/13/2014
- this poem is beautiful, with very good flow
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