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Rayne Onmi (Finished) Future Bonds (Will resume at a later date), and Dream World Mirau (Ongoing Updated Daily)
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Hello just so you know Rayne is a character from a story I am writing called...Rayne Onmi well until I think of something better that’s the title. As you can tell from about me section Rayne tragically loses her family from bandits raiding her home looking for anything they can sell for money. This story takes place in mid-evil Japan around the Mejii Era... the time of samurai and war lords ie period of Rurouni Kenshin. With her family's loss still heavy on her heart Rayne leaves her native village at the age of 6 determined to find the bandits and avenge her loved ones. Rayne follows the dirt path southward where it’s rumored the bandits lived. Famished...dehydrated and exhausted Rayne loses consciousness along the dirt path.

Some time later Rayne wakes up to find herself in a warm bed with several bowls of fresh water at her right side. She drank them both then looked around alarmed as she heard footsteps approaching....As her bedroom door creaked open a young man about 18 smiled and offered her a bowl of stew. As she ate the young man introduced himself as Kiel pronounced Kyle and Rayne told him everything that happened so far...

Kiel felt a sudden need to help Rayne out seeing how she was so young and now alone so he agreed to train her until she was strong enough to defeat the bandits and avenge her family.






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Lovely Dirt x3
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 25, 2007 @ 11:09am
wow. your a writer. eek cool. this reminds me of a book that i read, its called The White Fox Chronicles by Gary Paulson. i just started reading everones journals.


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 18, 2008 @ 11:10am
hi i'm renovartio one of dirt gamer's friend's and i saw that ur writing a book i myself am trying to come up with a book/video game (either way it's a story)
i already put down my foot note on my home page. i nmaed my charecter after my story too i have already come up with a few stories but i have a hard time starting it so i was hoping if i could read ur stories so i can see if i can hlp u and come up with a idea myself hope u approve. biggrin



Renovartio
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Rayne-Onmi
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commentCommented on: Sat May 24, 2008 @ 04:54pm
I begun reading over my journal entries now and am making corrections where i see they are needed. This entry is just to introduce characters and give alittle information about the story so I didn't go into alot of detail here otherwize you wouldn't want to read the story if you already knew what was going to happen.


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