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Your Guardian Angel Series
Something I am working on and would like to see what ppl think about it. So if anyone who read this would be so kind and leave a comment or message me on what they think then it would be greatly appreciated. ^_^ Btw I don't care if they are good revi
Your Guardian Angel 4

A little girl is asleep in her room. A figure appears in the corner. The figure stands their looking at the little girl. He floats over to her bed and starts to touch her hair. The little girl wakes up and turns around. She looks at him with a scared expression. The figure puts his fingers in his mouth and says shhh. The girl quickly pulls away from him and screams for help. The figure then quickly smacks her as she hits the wall. All of a sudden the father bursts through the door with a shotgun aimmed directly to the figure's back. The figure then exposes his great grey wings and tries to smack the father. As the father looks in shock he pulls the trigger on the shotgun. The right wing gets shot and it barely hangs from a limb. It starts to bleed badly. The figure quickly hits the father with the other wing and grabs the little girl.. The father stares as he is unable to move. The figure stands there for a moment seeing how much blood it has lost and jumps through the roof. The right wing gets hit and he falls on top of the roof breathing hard... Its a cloudy night as it stares up into the sky. As it bursted through the roof a older girl walks into the room and sees her father on the ground. The father says, get the gun and go to the roof.. I heard it fall on it trying to escape.. She then grabs the gun and the father says, watch it though.. The thing kicks like a mule. She quickly goes outside and starts to climb a ladder.. The figure then slowly gets up and looks where the little girl was dropped. It sees her at the other end of the roof. It slowly starts to walk to her as more blood keeps on dripping down to the ground. It falls half way over to her. It breaths heavily.. It thinks to himself.. I am almost there... I need to get her. All of a sudden it hears something get on top of the roof. It turns around and sees a young girl with the gun. She stands there shocked. It then gets back up slowly and the girl snaps out of it and points the shotgun to it. Stop or I'll shot! Seeing as she is holding a shotgun she realizes she won't do much damage at a distance so she begins to walk forward. The girl then stands right behind it with the gun to its back. The figure says, don't you know? I'm her guardian angel. It quickly jumps for her but as soon as the young girl saw that she shoot the gun. She falls back on her as she grabs her right shoulder. The blast shot through the other wing and a portion of its back and it goes flying of the roof. It falls down the house and hits the floor hard on its back. It spits out blood and moans in agony. It starts to sprinkle lightly. The girl looks over the edge of the roof and sees it moaning. She then turns back to look at her sister and sees two figures appear. One was a figure of a girl with one wing on her left and the other was a figure of a guy with one wing on his right. She stands there in shock and grabs the shotgun and cocks it again. As she holds it up she notices her shoulder is too hurt to hold the gun and she drops it. The girl floats down to the figure on the floor. The other one walks over to the girl and looks deeply into her eyes....





 
 
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