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Your Guardian Angel Series
Something I am working on and would like to see what ppl think about it. So if anyone who read this would be so kind and leave a comment or message me on what they think then it would be greatly appreciated. ^_^ Btw I don't care if they are good revi
I figure puts a small body onto the bed and the figures arms are all covered in blood. He thinks to himself "I was too late.. What should I do now?" He suddenly leans forwards and kicks right behind him. He feels pressure on his foot as the pressure lightens up. He hears a loud thump against the wall, as the figure turns around he sees the demon on its a** against the wall. The figure says, "What did you think you were going to kill me so easily?" The demon starts to get up slowly and says, "You know.. I didn’t think you would have actually heard ahh" The demon feels a sudden jolt against his stomach as he notices the figure is right next to him and his fist in its gut. The demon says in a heavy gasping voice, "You... Stupid.. Angel." The angel then moves his hand up the demon body rapidly and starts to choke him. The demon sqirms as he tries to breath. The angel says, "I hope you enjoyed the killing that innocent kid. Then the angel smiles. It will be your last." The demons face explodes in anger as it tries to sqirm even harder to be released. The angel then puts his other hand on the demons head and covers the demon eyes. "Good bye demon." Then the angel hears a bone snap as he lets the body drop and watches it disappear before it hits the ground. The angel then has his head in the wall and starts to feel his head throb like if it was going to explode. He shakes his head and feels a hand on its neck. All of a sudden he hears a voice say, "You know you’re really something. What makes you think you can get rid of one of my subbordinants and get away with it?" A loud bang hits the door as they both hear a voice say, "hey what’s going on in there. It giggles the handle. Jose open the door now." The voice says, "You know we’d better get out of here before the see us." The angel says, "violet?" As they both disappear from the room.. They reappear in a roof on top of a tall building. She lets him go and the angel gets up in a daze. He asks, "What are you doing here?" She smiles and says," Shouldn’t you be a little more happy that you get to see me Vincent." He smirks and stares at her. She has long jet black hair with purple streaks, a light color skin, piercing black eyes and i dark purple dress on. Why to see you. I think the totally presence of you is replusing." All of a sudden he feels a sudden pain on his cheek. She moves her hand back down and says, "Don’t you dare act that way. I don’t care what i’ve become I am still the same way you know." "The same huh? I think you’re just in denial." Violet looks at him. He is tall with short hair, a darker skin complextioin, dark green color eyes and a dark green shirt with black pants. "You know I just can kill you right now Vincent and there wouldn’t be anything you or any of your buddies can do about it." Vincent replies, "Just because you saved that child that doesn’t mean you have to go around killing other people." She begins to laugh and say, " Just because I want the rest of us not to turn" She begins to choke as Vincent lifts her up. "You know you’re really starting to piss me off. You damn well know none of what you’re saying is true. You got a little taste of the power and now you want more. The more you get the stronger you become. Yet you’re still weak. Once its all gone. Where would you get the power? From us?? I don’t think so. Violet kicks Vincent in the face as he lets her go then open palm hits him in the chest as he gets pushed back sinking his feet onto the ground so he won’t fall. Vincent inhales heavily and says "You haven’t changed a bit then again. What should I know right? She replies, "Yeah what should you know? All I am to you now is a demon but you know what?? Thats fine. He will be returing pretty soon anyways." Vincent stares at her. She laughs, "Yes he. There a reason why we’ve been killing all the people off. We just haven’t found the body he is actually in." Vincent starts to run towards her but before he gets to her she disappears. He looks around to see if he can find her then hears off into a distance.... I still love you, you know? Then a low laughter. Sorry we all can’t stay as Guardian Angels. Vincent stand theres and stares off into the sky. He thinks to himself, "We all can’t be.. Sooner or later the power will get to us. Just like our ancestors. However, we can at least try to make sure we save as money people as we can before its our time.. And when it is our time... We should accept our fate and stop running from our grim reaper..






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Awesum_Brite_Eyes
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Thu Sep 04, 2008 @ 11:56pm


U know u r very creative, u have many talents. Ur story was very interesting. It is different that's y I like it.


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