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Your Guardian Angel Series
Something I am working on and would like to see what ppl think about it. So if anyone who read this would be so kind and leave a comment or message me on what they think then it would be greatly appreciated. ^_^ Btw I don't care if they are good revi
Your Guardian Angel X


A person begins to walk down a steep hill, he treds slowly making sure he doesn’t slip as he hears squicks coming out of his shoes as he steps down everytime. He gets to the bottom of the hill and shakes a little bit as some water begins to fall off and wipes his hair and face with his hand trying to make sure his face gets dry. The guy is six ft, green eyes, a white complextion, short hair, toned structure and is wearing a black t-shirt with black pants and shoes. He gets next to his Expidition and opens it. He thinks to himself, "Man.. I’m so glad I have leather sits. He begins to laugh and say, More like pleather." He then hops into his car then starts it as he begins to drive away from the hill. He thinks to himself, "Well that was an odd experience. I knew I saw her in my dreams but I didn’t really expect her to be real. Maybe I should go tell her about it.. I don’t have the slightest idea if she wouldn’t believe me though." He begins to drive on a freeway. "If I keep staying on this freeway by the time I get there it will be dark. Maybe she doesn’t want to see my face again.." He notices a glimpse of something at the corner of his eye. He slightly turns his head to see what it was and sees a girl sitting in the passenger sit. He gets stratled and begins to move from one lane to the next as a car next to him honks his horn loud. The girl says, "Calm down, Dante. You don’t want to die in an early age, do you?" Dante gets a hold of himself and stares at her. She has short hair that is half way down her neck, a light brown complextion, brown eyes and is wearing a tan shirt with black pants and shoes. Dante says, "Aren’t you th.." He gets cut off and as the girl says, "Yes I am the one who has been saving you. The name is Lily. So now you can stop calling me girl." Dante looks at her and replies, "How did you know my name? He shakes his head wait... More importantly what do you mean saving me and what happened with your wings?" Lily laughs and says, "Oh those silly things. I’d figured they were to big for this vehicle so I decided to put them back in. Don’t worry about it and as for your answers, they will soon be answered. Just keep heading to Iris’s house. You’ll get the answers to your question when we ge there." Dante, " What do you mean by we? Wait... How do you know about Iris? What the hell are you?" She laughs a little harder. "Humans are so curious. Just do as I say and you will be ok." He replies, "Lily is it? If you’re going to be here without my premission then you can at least answer me this question." She turns and looks at him. "Fine if thats what you really want. You get one question. So go ahead." Dante keeps driving as he finally says, "Why did you save me from the cliff?" Lily turns and looks at him. "I thought I told you before. I am Your Guardian Angel." She then turns and looks out the window. Dante snaps, "Thats not a real answer. What the heck is that even suppose to mean?" She laugh again and says, "You wanted an answer to your question and I gave it to you. Its not my fault it wasn’t everything you were hoping for." Dante tries to calm down. Aggitated he says, "You know that wasn’t funny." Lily turns and looks at him. "Why are you so mad for? Its not my fault you haven’t done anything right." He replies, "What is that suppose to mean?" Lily says, "Don’t worry about it. I know you know what I am talking about. Trust me, Iris is going to be more then happy to see you. Despite what happened between you two." Dante then stares at the road and becomes quite. Lily replies, "I’m sorry I didn’t mean that." Dante replies, "Its ok.. I know I am not the best guy.. Shoot I don’t even know what the hell I’m here for. However, the thing I don’t understand is why are you going with me?" Lily, "There is a person there I need to talk to anyways." Dante sighs as he keep driving. Finally after what seemed like enternity he gets to her house. Lily gets out the car first and says, "Something happened here." Then she jumps from the lawn to the top of the roof. Dante just stares and drops his mouth as he sees that happening. He scurries to the door as he tries openning it. The door opens and Dante notices something was wrong. He screams out Iris as he begins to run towards her room. As he gets to the room he feel a pain going threw his throat and feels himself getting pulled up. Dante begins to choke as he notices a figure is picking him up. The figure says, "Who are you." Dante tries to reply through the agony but can’t. "Drop him Durregon. He isn’t a threat to anyone." Dante thinks to himself, "Lily?" As he vision blurrs and everything seem to get higher then feels his body hit the floor. Everything goes black after that. A blurry figure gets closer to him as the figure says in a tone of upset and worry, "Dante." The last thing that goes through Dante’s head is Lily...???
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User Comments: [3]
kendra6669
Community Member





Mon Mar 31, 2008 @ 09:17am


That was really good papi, I loved it. I only have one complaint. You need to write these faster cus you keep leavin me hangin at the end.
I love you.
Keep writing.
heart


Awesum_Brite_Eyes
Community Member





Wed Sep 03, 2008 @ 07:18pm


Hey Handsome,
Story writer 2 huh? Well u r full of surprises. U r a muy beuno! Lol, U know wat i think of u right? With Love


Pinking Shears
Community Member





Thu May 28, 2009 @ 02:45am


I enjoyed reading all of your stories. I can't wait to read more. biggrin


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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