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Your Guardian Angel Series
Something I am working on and would like to see what ppl think about it. So if anyone who read this would be so kind and leave a comment or message me on what they think then it would be greatly appreciated. ^_^ Btw I don't care if they are good revi
Your Guardian Angel 8


A figure backpeddles to a wall and starts to deep in a dark hall. The figure thinks to itself, "Where is he?? I can't see him.." The figure that stands there has a slender build to it, it has long shoulder length hair that covers its face except for one eye. Its hair is as black as night, pale skin, wears dark blue sweats and dark blue boots. All of a sudden it feels a hard jolt go through his body shattering the wall behind him that started from its gut and spits out blood on something infront of it. The other figure appears and says, "What?? Can't you see me?" The other figure has two fangs, white eyes, a mohawk, black leather jacket and pants, black work out gloves, and two demon wings tattoos on the back of its neck. As the figure starts to slowly slide down the wall landing on its a**, it looks up at the other figure. The other figure looks down and says, "Whats the matter, Skyler?" Can't you handle me?" It then spits on Skylers face. Skyler puts his head down after the spit landed on his cheek. Skyler says,"You know, Rocco. Its funny how you seem to be his b***h." He begins to laugh. Rocco then kicks Skyler right in the stomach. Skyler whines and spits out spit all over the floor as he struggles to catch his breath. Rocco says, "Who's the b***h now?" Skyler laughs and says "Your mom." Then he uppercuts Rocco in the balls. Rocco then leans forward screaming in agony as Skyler quickly gets up and knees him in the face and sends Rocco flying backgrounds to the ground. Skyler then quickly begins to run and stands on Rocco as he tries to make a get away. Rocco tried to grab Skyler's leg as he stepped on him but Rocco failed. Rocco screams, "SKYLER! Don' you dare run away." As he slowly starts to get up. Skyler runs down the hall and makes a right into a room. Once he walks into the room he sees two girls tied up and gagged. One barely looks fourteen, she has blonde hair, pale skin and blue eyes. The other girl already looks twenty-one, she is medium size with black hair, green eyes and a brownish skin tone. He quickly picks up the tv thats in the room and tosses out the window, making a huge hole through the house. He then grabs both girls and jumps out the window. As he clears the whole with both girls in his hands he then sprouts huge white angel wings and begins to fly away from the house. Skyler then looks back and sees Rocco jumping from the window and then sprouts out two huge black demon looking wings. Rocco says, "You can't out run me. You're way too slow." As he picks up and starts to get on Skyler's a**. Skyler begins to panic as he tries to fly towards a forest on the outside of the girls house. Skyler thinks to himself, "If I get into the forest he won't be able to fly in because his wings are too big... Then again, so are mine.. I'm going to have to land hard and put them away so I can get a head start on him. He is way too slow on ground." Skyler begins to get closer and closer as he feels Roccos hands desperately trying to grab his feet before he goes into the forest. Skyler is fixing to reach the forest when one of his wings hits the tree causing him to slow down. Rocco takes advantage of this and flies over Skyler and thrusts kick down on Skyler's back as they both start to fall down hard to the ground. Skyler lets go of both girls when he is flying close to the ground, both girls land hard on some bushes that broke their fall. Rocco stands over Skyler's back as the wings go back inside his body slowly having Skyler whine a little from the pain. Rocco laugh and reaches for Skyler's hair and pulls it back lifting his neck up. Rocco then says, "You know this is fun and all but let me make this more interesting." Rocco smashes Skyler's face into the ground as he begins to walk the direction both girls fell. Skyler looks back up and sees Rocco bringing both girls back and tosses the older one next to Skyler. Rocco laughs and says, "You know Skyler. I always liked mine younger then me." He then tosses the girl forward with her a** in the air and her face on the ground. Rocco then picks up her pj's and rips her underwear off. Skyler tries to get up and starts to shake as he barely gets both hands to push him up a little. Skyler looks at the older girl direction. She is screaming and they can barely make out her saying, "No not my sister. She is too young." Rocco laughs and says "Don't worry you'll get your turn too. There is pleanty to go around." As he pulls down his pants and penetrates the younger sister. Skyler still struggling to get up screams, "Rocco you b*****d!" Rocco laughs as he rapes the younger sister. The younger sister starts cry and they can hear her screaming in pain. Rocco looks over at Skyler and says "Whats the problem, Skyler? Can't you even protect her little sister? You're weak and pathetic." Skyler barely manages to get up shaking uncontrollibly. Rocco then finishes and stands up pulling back up his pants. Rocco laughs some more and says, "I will let you live for now but next time I won't. It was funny old buddy. We have to do this again sometime." As he picks up the younger sister and turns her to face him as his fangs grow out bigger. Skyler says, "NO!!!" Then Rocco bites down on the younger sisters neck and rips half of it off as the blood squirts all over the floor and all over Rocco. The older sister stares in horrible shook crying as she saw her little sister getting killed. Skyler begins to run toward him throwing a punch but Rocco slowly side steps it and trips Skyler. Rocco says, "See you later." Rocco begins to laugh maniacally and disappear. Skyler looks at the younger sister as she chokes on her blood and as she stops moving. Skyler begins to cry and scream, "WHY!!! WHY!!!" He turns around and looks at the older sister. The older sister just sits there staring at her dead sister now. Skyler begins to walk over to her and he unties her. He says, "I'm sorry Beatrix.. I couldn't... I'm not.. Strong enough..." He turn around and walks over the younger sister and bends down to carry her. Beatrix finds a large stone and picks it up as she walks slowly toward Skyler. Skyler doesn't notice as he picks her up and begins to cry on her. He says, "I'm sorry, Katie... I'm sorry." All of a sudden he feels a sharp pain on the back of his head as he falls down and passes out. Beatrix stands over him moving the stone out the way. Skyler wakes up and thinks to himself. "The same nightmare.. I wasn't strong enough. I couldn't stop him.." A door opens and he sees Beatrix walk in. She says, "Looks like you just woke up. Are you hungry? I can't let you die of hunger on me." Skyler puts his head back down trying to ignore her. She grabs his cheeks and pulls up his head as hair starts to move away from his face and say, "Was it worth it? Was Katies death worth it? For your stupid war? Huh??" As she quickly back hands him, he just lowers his head and turn to the side. She laughs. "You know what, Skyler? I hope he comes for you. I hope Rocco comes so I can watch him kill you. Then when he is distracted with you. I will kill him." Skyler says, "Revenge isn't the answer." She says, "What would you know?" She then walks away and shut the door again. He looks at the ground and wonders, "How many more have to die before it is over? I'm sorry, Katie... Beatrix... I guess I can't be Your Guardian Angel..." As a tear falls to the ground....






User Comments: [1]
kendra6669
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Sat Mar 08, 2008 @ 06:51am


You are an amazing writer papi. You should write more often. I love you and i cant wait to see what you write next.


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