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eclipse chapter 3
there was a long silence with the combatants staring at each other exchanging looks. eclipse had a look of boredom and felt like he was dragged into it. angel was raring to go. "prepare yourself," said namine and heat as they dashed toward eclipse and angel. the battle had begun. eclipse countered heat's thrust and hit him in the stomach. eclipse did a bacflip kick in the air and sent heat flying and eclipse summoned a current of water so he could land on it. heat crashed into a rock with an immense force. angel was busy with her battle and namine shot a shard of ice at angel. angel smiled and deflected the ice shard with her hand and shot a beam of lightning at namine.

namine dodged it and charged into angel which sent angel flying into the air. namine said," is that all you've got. angel said, "not really." she started generating lightning all over her body and she casted a spell called lightning vortex. a circle of lightning appeared under namine's feet and it looked like a circle with a star in the middle. several lightning bolts came from the sky and shocked namine and then the circle exploded lightning and sent namine flying.

angel looked devastated at her own power and said," yes, score one for me." namine crashed into the ground and skidded backwards. she got up looking hurt and said," you'll pay for that. "come get some,"said angel. eclipse was playing with heat while heat was getting madder and madder. a fireball shot past eclipse's arm. "is that all you got?" said eclipse. "stop moving you brat," said heat. heat shot ffive fireballs simultaneously at eclispe. eclipse sommoned up a current of water and blocked them. when he did this heat had somehow dissapeared.

eclipse stood there and wondered where he could be. eclipse closed his eyes and magically saw an image of heat and his location. "nice try," said eclipse. " try again next time." darkness started to encircle around him and eclipse used his spell dark arrow. it pierced through the ground and hit heat and heat appeared out of the ground hurt and eclipse looked at him and shook his head back and forth and said," that was slick, but not well thought out." heat said," shutup!" eclipse dashed up to him and put both his feet on his chest and pushed with all his might and flipped off his chest and landed on the floor. heat flew backwards and fell on the floor.

angel was busy fighting off shards of ice while namine was on the attack. eclipse watched his sister getting pummeled by ice. he got unfocused and flare blasted him with a fireball. eclipse slammed into the ground and slammed into a wall. your match is against me. he glared at heat and started to get serious with his eyes turning red. he said," your about to die for that!" eclipse was just about to pull out his sword when he heard his sister scream. eclipse looked at his sister. his sister had been hit with an ice spell and she was stunned on the ground. eclipse said," hold on im coming!" he started to go to his sister, but heat blocked his way. heat tried to punch eclipse in the air, but eclipse caught his fist in midair and hit him in the stomach and kicked him down to the ground. heat hit the ground with a thud.

eclipse looked at him and his eyes glowed with a dark red color and he said," im getting really tired of you stay out of my way!" eclipse was levitating in the air and then heat had an evil grin on his face. heat started generating fire like crazy around his whole body and shot a spell called heat wave. a big ball of fire as big as a moon flew straight past eclipse. eclipse said to him," bad aim." heat smiled and said," i wasn't aiming at you. "what?" eclipse said to himself while turning around . he saw the huge fireball closing in on his sister. "damn it," he said to himself and flew towards the fire balll to try to stop it, but it was too late because the fireball that angel didn't see coming had hit her.

eclipse saw his sister fall in slow motion to the ground. eclipse stood floating in the sky in shock and anger. he looked at her and he started to shake with anger. namine said," good job heat." one down one to go. eclipse flew towards her and landed onto the ground. he knealt by his sister's side and picked her up while still on the ground and held her in his arms. she felt so lifeless and still. eclipse closed his eyes as he was just about to start crying, but didn't because he made a promise to himself. to never cry again. namine said," oh how sad huh heat?" heat replied yeah boo hoo makes me so sad." eclipse placed her back on the ground and something inside of him was starting to change.

dark energy was circling around him. eclipse full with rage said, i'll kill both of you!" soon as that was said the darkness seemed to swallow him and started changing his appearance. eclipse became taller and his eyes turned dark black. his clothes changed . the darkness around him ceased and he stood there and looked at them. this was his dark side inside of him all along. namine and heat were shocked and then said," we arent scared of you your probably still weak!" eclipse stood there stared at her and smiled.

in an instant he was behind her and hit her hard. he sent her flying through the air and she crashed through a wall and ended up on the other side of it. then eclipse looked at heat while heat stood there in shock and fright. heat said," stay away from me!" he shot a series of fireballs at eclipse. eclipse stood there as the fireballs just smothered away as they hit him. he smiled and said," is that it?" i guess its my turn then." eclipse started generating dark energy around him and then a big ball of fire was in his hands, but it was dark flames. he said," this is payback for what you did to my sister!' he casted the spell "dark fiagra"

heat stood there and laughed and said," do you think fire will work against me?" eclipse said," yes." the flames hit heat and ate at him and started to incinerate him and the dark ball of fire exploded. eclipse stood there and looked up into the sky and thought," the animal i have become." the sky started to turn back to its regular color and eclipse started to change back to himself. the last bit of darkness was in him and he walked back over to his sister and fell down right beside her. he laid parallel next to her and closed his eyes in exhaustion. he heard birds chirping and the sun shine on him and the whistling of the wind






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angel_savior9
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 15, 2008 @ 11:24am
dude that was the koolest story i've read in about umm .... EVER but what happens i what more don't leave me at a cliffy!!!! ciffy's suck 0.o grrr


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 23, 2008 @ 04:09pm
Awsome! Do you play a lot of Final Fantasy? Your battle moves sound familiar.



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