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eclipse chapter 2
"eclipse, whats in the envelope?" asked angel. eclipse turned around and said," its a message. eclipse read the message silently and the gave it to his sister. she skimmed through it and said," who would want us to meet them on the outskirts of town?" "i dont know, but do you want to go?" asked eclipse. angel said," dont you think we should go?" "no not really, because i think its a waste of time," said eclipse. "okay then we're going," said angel ignoring the fact that eclipse didn't want to go. "you must have completely ignored what i said, or there was a misunderstanding cause if i refer back to a couple of minutes ago, i think i said i didn't want to go," said eclipse.angel said," i heard what you said, but you have to come with me or else." "or else what?"said eclipse quizzically. she thought about it and said," i'll run away from home and never come baack. eclipse stared at her without any emotion in his eyes. he looked at her and said," whatever ill go with you, but dont think it was because you said you were going to runaway. she had a smile on her face and thought to herself," he really does love me alot because that wasn't the answer i was expecting.

so they relaxed for a minute in their house and at approximately 5:00, they set out to the outskirts of town. they passed their neighbor on the way and she greeted them. "hi angel,"she said. she saw eclipse and started to blush and did a cute wave to eclipse and said," hi eclipse." he rose his hand in silence and waved back. she thought to herself," eclipse just gets cuter and cuter everyday and one day he will be mine." angel said," hi crystal. she broke her trance from eclipse and replied," hi angel." crystal was eclipse's and angel's next door neighbor and she was about 5.1, she had beautiful light brown eyes with long brown hair. she had a beautiful body frame and she had a major crush on eclipse. crystal said," where are you going?" angel said while lying," we're going to the park." "oh,"said crystal. "i wish i could come with you guys, but my parents need me to clean up the house. angel wondered," why are you outside then?" "i just stepped out to get some air," said crystal. "its lovely out don't you think eclipse?" eclipse glanced at her and his eyes changed from black to blue and he said with sadness in his voice," "yeah its very nice out." crystal was about to ask him whats wrong, but decided to leave him alone. "crystal come in and finish cleaning honey," her mother said from inside the house. "coming," she said as she waved goodbye to angel and eclispe. "bye," said angel.

they started to walk down the street and angel saw the despair in eclipses eyes. she wondered what made him so sad that quick. she grabbed eclipses hand as they were walking down the street and smiled at him. eclipse looked for a second and turned his head away. she wanted to know what was up with him, but didn't ask. finally after about 10 minutes of walking, they were finally there. angel looked around and didn't see anybody. she shouted out loudly," is anyone here." eclipse said, "dont be so loud." they waited for a response and assumed there was no one her so they turned around and started to go back home when they saw a stream of water hit the floor in front of them. eclipse looked up to where the shot came from. there were two people in a tree and they descended down from the tree and stood a couple feet away from them. there you are we've been expecting you. eclipse said smartly," we know that cause we got your letter." "now what else are you here for?" said eclipse.

the both of them smiled and said," sorry, but we've been ordered to kill you both. angel looked at both of them and said," well, your going to have to tell the person who ordered you to do this that thats too bad cause that wont be happening on my watch." eclipse agreed silently. he was hoping that it would be something more important than this because he didn't feel like battling anyone right now. angel whispered to eclipse and said," you get the one on the right and ill get the one on the left. he shook his head and they all separated in pairs. angel and the girl was on the right side of this hill and eclipse and the boy was on the left side. the girl said to angel," oops, i've forgotten my manners." my name is namine." angel replied," im gonna guess that you already know our names so i wont have to tell you. meanwhile, "before your death, let me at least tell you my name." said the boy. "my name is heat". i already know your name, so no need for you to tell me. eclipse said," well hey, since im in a good mood and i don't feel like battling right now, lets call this a draw; "you walk this way and i walk that way and we'll pretend this never happened." heat said "stop with the jokes you insolent fool and prepare for battle. eclipse stood there and said i warned you. they all were concentrated on each other and there was no noise made but the shuffling of leaves.






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Dove Sundown
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commentCommented on: Tue Apr 22, 2008 @ 05:10pm
Hmmm... interesting. And colorful. Vivid storytelling, nice characters. A good story all and all. heart


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