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I'm rewriting my story, if you want to know why, look at my entry before this one.


Seanna stood on a cliff, looking out at the hidden leaf village. It looked to be about a 2 days walk from where she and her half-brother, Onken, were.

“Not very hidden if you ask me.”, Seanna said to herself. There was a rustling, and then her brother came up beside her. They looked a lot alike, the both had bright red hair and light blue eyes, and the only difference was in height. Seanna was short, as much as she hated admitting it, while Onken was tall. He had glasses and wore his red hair in a ponytail, while Seanna had good vision and let her waist length hair fly free.

“How long are you going to stand up here? We aren’t going to get anywhere by looking at it.”, Onken told her. It was morning; they had just gotten up from their make-shift camp.

“Really? I didn’t know that. Thanks for enlightening me.”, Seanna replied, sarcasm in her voice. She wasn’t a morning person.

“No need to be snippy, but please come on. I’d like to get to civilization as soon as possible. You might be used to this, but I’m not,” he replied.

“Ok,” Seanna said quietly. Her brother noticed something was wrong. She never gave up that easily. She would argue with him for hours on end if it meant she would win. It was like a game to them, one that she always won.

“What is it?” He asked. She didn’t reply for a moment.

“What if they are all mad at me? I did leave suddenly for a few years. I wouldn’t blame them if they were mad.” She finally replied.

“Give them more credit than that. You had good reasons. So what if you left for a while? It’s not like you are expected to stay in one place your entire life. Stop worrying,” Onken told her. Seanna looked a little happier.

“Thanks Voice of Reason,” She replied with a grin. They heard a howl and then a white wolf appeared with a fox ridding on its back.

“See? Even they want you to hurry up,” Onken jested.

“Alright already, I’m coming. You guys sure are pushy,” She replied. They packed up and headed to the hidden leaf village, joking and arguing with each other the entire way.


They were still walking when evening came. They had been walking all day.

“How close are we?” Seanna asked.

“Why do you assume I know?” Onken replied.

“Because you do. You have the sense of direction, I have none,” was her response.

“If we camp tonight, we should get there late afternoon tomorrow,” he answered. They started setting up camp. It wasn’t much of one, just a tent and a fire. They put their weapons and other items in the tent. Seanna did a few hand signs and blew a little fire on the pile of sticks then sat down by it. Onken joined her. They just sat for a while, looking at the fire. Then they heard a twig snap. The fox ears they both shared, unnoticeable before, went up.

“How cliché, a snapping twig,” Seanna whispered. They stayed perfectly still, then Onken got up and slowly inched towards the tent that held their weapons. As soon as he got close to the tent, a shadow came out and came towards her. She couldn’t see much, it was too dark, so she closed her eyes for a second and when she opened them, they were red. She got the sharingan from an ancestor in the past that must have been an Uchiha. She got a good look at the person. It was a man, with dark green hair about 2 inches long. His eyes were brown, if eyes were the windows to the soul, she knew for sure he was evil.

He must think my brother is the fighter. That’s very sexist, too bad for him he’s wrong. Seanna pulled out the dagger she always kept at her waist and ducked under his reach, then she sliced his arm, causing him to back up, surprised. She didn’t like to kill in less it was absolutely nessacery, she hoped he would run if she surprised him. That was not the case, he just pulled out a sword and came again. Seanna barely managed to block with her dagger in time. Just when she thought she was going to lose, she heard her brother yell her name. She jumped back and her brother handed her broadsword. It had a simple design, the blade was black and the hilt silver. She felt stronger now that she had her broadsword in hand. She ran at her enemy now, then, seeing her new confidence, the attacker fled.
“Who was that?” Seanna asked Onken.

“No idea. That’s odd though. No offense but whenever we get attacked, it’s usually because of you. But he attacked you first, thinking you were the weaker of the two of us,” Onken replied.

“I’m insulted,” Seanna joked. Onken ignored her.

“I’ll take the first watch, you go to bed,” Onken said. Seanna went to bed but she couldn’t sleep.
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Comments please! smile I tried to make it longer then my chapters before, but if you guys think it is too long, please tell me.